Tuesday, February 8, 2011

stickman

The United States is the safest country in the world, it makes it people feel secured even during a war period. The United State home to people how was a victim of war, people from third world counties and nearby countries. It is the most ideal place of peace and harmony so most people many believe but inside the real United States there are many thing going on that people sometime don’t notice or do notice. It is to say that the idea of America is perfect but the people are like everyone else they are not too mean and they are not too nice like Bryson world. There is a lot of gang activity going on in America, the police are trying to reduce gang activity but it is hard to do this knowing that a new gang might rise at any time. The creeps and bloods are the biggest gangs in America follow by the three nitrous and fourth conner. Even if the gang activity and gang killing is not what make America but the drugs that are smuggled to America such as weed and crack people kill each other over these things more than anything else.

1 comment:

  1. You did a nice job of setting this up and knocking it down. Your sentences and ideas could be written more clearly though...especially in the middle section.

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