Tuesday, February 8, 2011

bill bryson compliant

Bill Bryon in this chapter talk about how his life is difficult. Bryon compliant when things didnt work out for him. that he worries about the small thing and think that those things makes his life difficult. like Bryon compliant about how his bag was stuck and cant get it to open but when he did get it to open his stuff in his bag flew everywhere. that is nothing compare if u got an entire bags of important stuff stolen from you that be worst. compare to a bag with is thing fell out in a room Bryson can atleast find his stuff or buy a bigger bag to put his stuff in compare to stolen bag.

1 comment:

  1. This is a good start at explaining why his life is so difficult, and then turning around and knocking down his argument by pointing out how things could be so much worse.

    There are some grammar and sentence-structure issues that make some parts difficult to read...and some sloppy errors like "u" instead of "you"--make sure you re-read the posts before posting them.

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