Thursday, January 27, 2011
ESSAY 2 Disagreeing
In the chapter junk food heaven, by Bill Bryson, he talks about how how there is countless varieties of everything, from cereals to candy bars, and even breakfast items. And he says that americans have one the highest rates for obecity, averaging 17.8 pounds of pretzels per year. Now I disagree with Bill bryson just a bit. I agree that there's countless sugary and fatty foods every where, and countless commercials advertising everything from cereals, to the latest ice cream toppings, but it is all about will power. His wife who is also in the store, would buy healthy stuff cheese and celery. To me it is all about will power. The temptation is there but there are other choices.
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This is a good start, but you're throwing a little too much of your claim out there for an introduction. Save those specific arguments for the body of your paper, and keep the main claim simple and clear.
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