Thursday, January 27, 2011
DISAGREEING WITH BRYSON
In the chapter "Junk-food Heaven" the autor Bil Bryson talks about how to many people like to go to groccery. he says that there are many people that likes to buy to much junk food. he talks about how junk food is not that great and is not healty. Although he is kind of correct, i would say that junk food is sometimes good to eat but not all the time. Junk food is also good when you going to movies or going other places that is fun with your friends. It is also good if someone is mad you espically if it a girl.
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This is a good start. You might put a little more detail into summarizing Bryson's essay so we can better understand his point of view.
ReplyDeleteAlso, you have a clear main claim--good. (The one that starts with "although".) However, the final two sentences look more like subordinate claims that are developed into two paragraphs in the body of your paper.
End the introduction with the main claim, not the specific reasons.