Tuesday, February 8, 2011
strawman
People in this country simply just don't walk anymore. America has become a very lazy country, and people don't walk as much as they should. Back in the day, people would always walk from their homes to the store to get groceries, and other things they needed everyday. The only problem with this claim is that people just can't do this anymore. The reason why people don't walk anymore is mainly because they can't walk to places like before. In today's world people are farther away from stores and other places needed to get everyday items.
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You've got the right idea here, but you might build the strawman up more and knock it down with concrete evidence.
ReplyDeleteAlso, make sure each sentence you write is meaningful. The first and second sentences essentially say the same things, as do the fourth and fifth sentences.