I for once, disagree about how Bill Bryson says that junk food is not good at all. I would say that junk food is good sometimes like when you going to a movie, or going places with your friends. Although I understand that many people would agree what Bryson said. They might say junk food is not good for your health. They also might say it makes you fat or gain more weight.They might say that they are McDonald ever corner in america. I would still say that junk food is still not that bad, the only person that is not good for is the people that are eating too much. The person who makes it only makes it for fun time or to enjoy it, and not to eat it all the time. If people eat the junk food sometimes then they would not be fat.
Lay out the opposing view before you give yours: "Many people agree with Bryson. There's a big movement in this country to get healthier by cutting out junk food. Lots of research blames junk food for people gainint weight, and it's no help that there's a McDonald's on every corner. However, we shouldn't blame junk food--we should take responsibility for what we put in our bodies...."
ReplyDeleteSee how I lay out the opposing argument first, and build it up, and then knock it down?