The chapter “At A loss” it talks about how Bryce how in the real world it’s difficult. Like in paragraph 2 it talk about how he gets lost easily loss of its way back to the hotel or end up in some alley. In the 3rd paragraph it talks about how his bag zipper was stuck and how he can’t get it open, so after many yanks it finally open but things in that bag has scatter every where and how his zipper on his bag cut a his finger and he compare to a over paying for tobacco. Or how he accidentally knock his drank over and spill on the lady in a seat near him and again. In this chapter it pretty much talks about how little thing makes him feel out of place but the unrelated things such as little thing that he did or what he has done with others.
You make great points here, but more proofreading is necessary so that readers can easily follow the points you make.
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